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Post by Deleted on Sept 28, 2014 21:47:44 GMT -5
Sure, it's fine. I'll post as shenzi instead ^^
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Post by Sabor on Oct 5, 2014 15:23:18 GMT -5
Setting Fire to the Sky
Okay, I'm not 100% right now on what's happening to Maddie, but I know she's going to need help moving and some medical treatment. Anyone willing to lend the wolf a paw? Can be either a hero or a villain.
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Post by Lord Stitch on Oct 5, 2014 16:20:54 GMT -5
Buck took off but Crystallene and Chinook are about to flee the battle. They could stumble upon her if you'd like?
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Post by Ray on Oct 15, 2014 1:34:16 GMT -5
RIP DannyFirst of all, I have an issue with your post in general. You're STILL writing in present tense. Even after Stitch make a freaking announcement about NOT doing that. You need to write in past tense. Secondly... Great Danes were not bred to hunt wolves. They were, and I'm quoting the American Kennel Club here, So unless Danny's opponent has magically turned into a boar, that one bit of dialogue is extremely laughable. Thirdly... How would Danny even know what his breed was bred for? Great Danes aren't used for hunting in this day and age. I doubt Danny, a pet Great Dane, would even know anything about what his ancestors were bred for. Bottom line, there's a lot that ought to be fixed here. I'd get on that.
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Post by Ray on Nov 20, 2014 20:32:22 GMT -5
Revenge is the Sweetest Joy
Raine, Digger, and Sand Shark, could you all please try to write longer posts? And maybe try to write in past tense? All three of you are writing in present tense still.
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Post by Grey Brother on Nov 24, 2014 13:56:08 GMT -5
Thread: Revenge is Like the Sweetest Joy OOC: Hey Marek, feel free to engage Grey Brother as he attempts to help Mowgil. I'm in the mood for a wolf fight.
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Post by RIP Claudius on Dec 3, 2014 15:24:58 GMT -5
Thread: Revenge is like the sweetest joy OOC: Hey Shang I think you might of missed Claudius's attack on Shang
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Post by Shang on Dec 5, 2014 0:16:22 GMT -5
Your right, I did. Amended!
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Post by Angel on Dec 6, 2014 3:25:57 GMT -5
Mourning the Living Can I just say, Stitch, that I highly approve of the date chosen? I didn't really think at the time, but it's like Partner stuck around long enough that he could spend Christmas with Cres before heading off; and, I dunno, that strikes me as kinda cute ^^
Also, just for the record, what he probably told Cres about his reasons for leaving was that he just needed to get away from the place where One died and the constant reminder of it that the whole war was. He probably would have promised to keep in touch with her, but without really knowing how that would work XD;;
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Post by RIP Claudius on Dec 6, 2014 19:08:54 GMT -5
Thread: Revenge is the sweetest joy Hey Elsa I think you might of missed the post with Nelleke about to eat Anna you might want to edit your post so yer sister won't become Dino chow. LOL!
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Post by Ray on Dec 6, 2014 19:44:37 GMT -5
And I think you missed how Chippy is going after Anna as well. :U So I'm not editing anything.
@boo - You're writing in present tense, dear. Could you please edit your post so that it's in past tense?
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Post by Angel on Dec 7, 2014 2:59:27 GMT -5
Wait, what's happening with Anna? Have I missed something? ^^;;; I thought she was being ignored, so I started only paying attention to Lucky's fight and completely forgot I had her in the thread ^^;;;;;;;;;
Could I get filled in here, please? ^^;;
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Post by Ray on Dec 7, 2014 3:34:36 GMT -5
I honestly don't know. :U I thought she was being ignored, too, so I wrote my reply in the assumption that Chippy would be the only one going after her.
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Post by Angel on Dec 7, 2014 3:39:49 GMT -5
I've just been reading up on it, too. Apparently, giant monster over there tried to take a bite out of her earlier, which is, like... how do I even defend against someone like that? I don't really fancy fighting a massively overpowered dinosaur who my character would have no chance of survival against ^^;;;
Also, on another note: Okay, Raine, seriously? Can you maybe stop pushing your dalmatian into other people's fights unasked for? I would think that, on a battlefield, he ought to have a lot more pressing concerns - like his own survival, kind of - than whether some princess he's never met before is in trouble. It gets silly when you have him charging in to defend people who are vastly more capable than himself every single fight.
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Post by Ray on Dec 7, 2014 3:49:46 GMT -5
Raine - Yes, what Angel said. It's really starting to get ridiculous. On another note that adds to the ridiculousness of the whole thing, could you maybe try to pick opponents that Raine would actually stand half a chance against? I mean no offense, but I seriously doubt that a dalmatian would stand any kind of a chance against what is essentially a young adult lioness. So you'll forgive me if Chippy doesn't acknowledge your attempt at attacking her.
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